Sep 7, 2016 · Hey guys, my writing teacher is having me write an honest poem. Could you help me fix it or switch stanzas around? Thanks so much! I was born on October 24,

Nov 5, 2016 · A true beauty this poem is! I like the subtle rhyme between "thousand" and "surrounded" in the first 4 lines, that do not have rhyming ends. When rhymes arrive a little …

negligence a couple hundred years ago, killing one was abnormality. now, people are attacking, starting wars without mutuality. innocent children are dying,

Since then, several Zoners have been having a great old time turning out witty, usually rhyming pieces in this form. This poem is not a quadrisept, just sticks to four-syllable lines. It is actually …

Nov 20, 2016 · You paint a detailed picture here, spiteful and gloomy, in a very compelling form, showing of great rhyming skills bouncing up and down the rythmic flow of a ranting old man...

How to get more Feedback! So you have posted a poem, song or short story and want some feedback but aren’t getting any comments. We have all be there and it can be frustrating, I …